All of us have different dreams about our future job(1).Some people dream to become a doctor or an engineer, others dream to become a businessman or a manager....The answer for questions "Why do I choose this job?" " Why do I want to become a doctor, a Businessman or someone else?" can be answer by ourselves.I also have a dream about my future job(1).I dreamed about it(9) when I was a 6 year old girl(5).On the first day school, I was impressed by my teacher(3);I loved her a lot and wished to become a teacher in the future(1).Up to now,I still remember her(1) when I recall my first day school(1).
It was a nice day(5,)my mother took me to school on her bike(1).Standing in the school yard ,where was crowded with many people,I saw many things that very strange with me(1).I felt lost and homesick(4); many pupils have the same feeling with me(1), even some pupils cried a lot(3) when their mother went away(3).My teacher was a cheerfull person(5).She made us feel comfortable and happy(1) when we went to school(3).She taught us many things(2);we loved her and our school a lot(1).From that time,I had a dream to become a teacher like her to bring my knowledge to children in our country(1).A job in the future helps me have condition to live on myself and help my family in finance(1).Bring knowledge to children is also the way to show that we love our country(5).
Being a student,I will try to study hard to make my dream come real.
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dreams : SDO
us : SIO
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Hello Nhu!
Trả lờiXóaYour written paper is spectacularly.However you haven't underlined five sentence pattern.
The sentence:" I dream about it " belongs to the first sentence pattern_I think that.
You seem to be tell about your teacher.I think this is a way to answer the question:"why do you want to become a taecher in the future?".But I guess you like becoming a english teacher.Is that true?Hi....hi... Goodbye.
Hello meo_u!!!
Trả lờiXóaMy name is Quyen not Nhu!
I also want to underline it but I don't know how to do it.If you know,would you please show me.At first,I also think like you,it must be in the first sentence pattern but after one day thought about it I have to change my first choice because I think "it" follow by preposition "about" so it may be a Prepositional phrase.thanks for your comments
You guess I like to become an english teacher uh I will give You 10 marks because you are right Hi...hi goodbye
hello quyen!
Trả lờiXóathank you very much.you commented my lesson.I think you wrote very much .I hope your dream will be come true.I think ,you wrote and noted as same as my idea.I don't find your mistake in your paragraph.good luck!
bai viet qua lan man bai nay kheo la ta canh ko di sau vao trong tam
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