Thứ Sáu, 13 tháng 11, 2009

My Family


Family is an important part (1) in our life(2). Each of us has a family; and all the members in your family(2) love you a lot. When you go away from home," where will you think about?" or " which will make you miss most?" I am certain that the answer will be(3) the family. Of course, I am not exceptional.
I am very lucky because I have a happy family(1). All of them love me and so do I. There are six people in my family(2). They are my parents, my elder brother,my two younger sisters and me.
My father is a builder. He is a patient man(1). When he starts doing something(5), he never leaves it behind before he finishes it. Through his actions(2), he teaches us many things and shows us the way to become a good person(6). He never says he loves us, but I know he loves us a lot.
My mother is a housewife. She is a caring woman(1). she looks after us carefully ,and the meals she cooks are very delicious. She herself also makes the clothes for all members(2) in my family(2). I am very proud of her when someone asks me about my mother.(2)
My brother is a student. He also goes away to study like me. Because he is very busy, he only returns home once a month. He made us surprise many times by returning but didn't tell(3) anyone about that. He did that just because he missed us and wanted to have the meal cooked by my mother with all members(2) in my family.(2) My two sisters are pupils. They go to school themselves. In their free time(2), they help my mom to cut the grass(6) or to water the garden(6), where my mom grow many fresh vegetables.
People said that the men build the house, and the women make it become a home ,but in my family(2) both father and mother join hand to make a happy family(6). I still remember many times my family hold together. We went picnic in a eco_tourism(2) and had lunch together under a banyan tree(2). My father taught us how to fish. My mother cooked many delicious meals(1) from fish. We talked about everything. My father made us laugh a lot by telling us some funny stories(4). It is really an unforgetable memory(1) of mine. Now I have to study(3) far away from home, so I don't have(3) many chances to meet members in my family(2). I always look forward to going home(5) on weekends(2) to meet them(6).

Note:
(1) Noun phrase
(2) Prepositional phrase
(3) Verb phrase
(4) Participial phrase
(5) Gerund phrase
(6) Infinitive phrase



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  1. hi Quyen!
    I've readed about your family and i that you are so lucky to have such a happy family. I can see your feeling to family because I have too. By the way, I think your writing will be better if you use the future tense for these senences" When you went away from home, where did you often think about? or which made you miss most? ". bye bye

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  2. I really like your family .Your written paper is good .But I think that"funny stories" belongs to(1).I wish your family is happy forever.Bye...Bye

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