Thứ Tư, 21 tháng 10, 2009

My Grandmother

The person whom I admire is my grandmother, Hoa(5). She is living with my youngest uncle in a small town(3) which is not very far from mine. Sometimes, i think she is a superwoman, a real superwoman.
My grandfather died soon(3), so she had to look after all of their children up to 12 persons(1). For a single woman, it was a hard work(5), but she did it perfectly(1). None of her children had to leave school soon(1).She was a caring woman(5). My mom, who admires her a lots ,always tells me about her(1). She said that my grandmother never let her children feel hungry only one time(1) because she was a good farmer(5), she worked on the farm(3), and her children, who are older than others, always helps her after school(1). She was not only a mother but also a father(5). She showed her children the way to become a good person(2). She spent all her life for her children(1), and now she is very pleased with what she did(4)
note:
all : SDO
children: SIO

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  1. Hello Quyen!
    I feel that your grandmother is a woman wonderful.And you love her very much.However I want you to write logger.
    I think that if a sentence includes two clauses, you should classify the main clause.
    In sentence 8,I think that "HER" in the clause'who admires her' is SDO

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  2. Thank you for your comments,meo_u.You advise me to classify the main clause if the sentence includes two clauses.I agree with you that "her" in clause "who admires her" is SDO but I think this clause is a relative clause not the main clause so I classified "me" is the SDO of the main clause "My mother always tells me about her".

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  3. thanks for your cm,Quyen!!!thanks for your love to my teacher!^^!there are so many reasons which make me love English,not only that!^^
    -"For a single woman".i think it is "to a singer woman".!^^
    bless you!

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