who do you want to become in the future?

All of us have different dreams about our future job(1).Some people dream to become a doctor or an engineer, others dream to become a businessman or a manager....The answer for questions "Why do I choose this job?" " Why do I want to become a doctor, a Businessman or someone else?" can be answer by ourselves.I also have a dream about my future job(1).I dreamed about it(9) when I was a 6 year old girl(5).On the first day school, I was impressed by my teacher(3);I loved her a lot and wished to become a teacher in the future(1).Up to now,I still remember her(1) when I recall my first day school(1).
It was a nice day(5,)my mother took me to school on her bike(1).Standing in the school yard ,where was crowded with many people,I saw many things that very strange with me(1).I felt lost and homesick(4); many pupils have the same feeling with me(1), even some pupils cried a lot(3) when their mother went away(3).My teacher was a cheerfull person(5).She made us feel comfortable and happy(1) when we went to school(3).She taught us many things(2);we loved her and our school a lot(1).From that time,I had a dream to become a teacher like her to bring my knowledge to children in our country(1).A job in the future helps me have condition to live on myself and help my family in finance(1).Bring knowledge to children is also the way to show that we love our country(5).
Being a student,I will try to study hard to make my dream come real.
Note
dreams : SDO
us : SIO

My Grandmother

The person whom I admire is my grandmother, Hoa(5). She is living with my youngest uncle in a small town(3) which is not very far from mine. Sometimes, i think she is a superwoman, a real superwoman.
My grandfather died soon(3), so she had to look after all of their children up to 12 persons(1). For a single woman, it was a hard work(5), but she did it perfectly(1). None of her children had to leave school soon(1).She was a caring woman(5). My mom, who admires her a lots ,always tells me about her(1). She said that my grandmother never let her children feel hungry only one time(1) because she was a good farmer(5), she worked on the farm(3), and her children, who are older than others, always helps her after school(1). She was not only a mother but also a father(5). She showed her children the way to become a good person(2). She spent all her life for her children(1), and now she is very pleased with what she did(4)
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all : SDO
children: SIO